Re: [Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02

2020-05-13 Thread Roman Danyliw
oman Danyliw > Cc: emu@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02 > > On May 13, 2020, at 4:25 PM, Roman Danyliw wrote: > > > > Hi! > > > > I conducted my AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02. The document > is in g

Re: [Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02

2020-05-13 Thread Alan DeKok
On May 13, 2020, at 4:25 PM, Roman Danyliw wrote: > > Hi! > > I conducted my AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02. The document > is in good shape. I have largely editorial feedback below that can be > handled with IETF LC input. > > (1) Section 1. Editorial. COMMENTs often come