Re: [Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02

2020-05-13 Thread Roman Danyliw
oman Danyliw > Cc: emu@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02 > > On May 13, 2020, at 4:25 PM, Roman Danyliw wrote: > > > > Hi! > > > > I conducted my AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02. The document > is in g

Re: [Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02

2020-05-13 Thread Alan DeKok
On May 13, 2020, at 4:25 PM, Roman Danyliw wrote: > > Hi! > > I conducted my AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02. The document > is in good shape. I have largely editorial feedback below that can be > handled with IETF LC input. > > (1) Section 1. Editorial. COMMENTs often come

[Emu] AD Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02

2020-05-13 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I conducted my AD review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-02. The document is in good shape. I have largely editorial feedback below that can be handled with IETF LC input. (1) Section 1. Editorial. COMMENTs often come up in IESG review the it isn't clear up front what exactly is being