[DNSOP] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08

2022-12-09 Thread Catherine Meadows via Datatracker
Reviewer: Catherine Meadows Review result: Has Nits I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors an

Re: [DNSOP] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08

2022-12-09 Thread Joe Abley
On Fri, Dec 9, 2022 at 23:17, Catherine Meadows via Datatracker wrote: > Nits: There are a lot of unexplained acronyms, especially at the beginning: > RR, SOA, NS RR, RDATA, PTR, and so on. These should be spelled out the first > time they are used at the document. Most of these are the formal

Re: [DNSOP] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08

2022-12-09 Thread Paul Vixie
Joe Abley wrote on 2022-12-09 14:59: On Fri, Dec 9, 2022 at 23:17, Catherine Meadows via Datatracker mailto:nore...@ietf.org>> wrote: Nits: There are a lot of unexplained acronyms, especially at the beginning: RR, SOA, NS RR, RDATA, PTR, and so on. These should be spelled out the first tim

Re: [DNSOP] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08

2022-12-09 Thread Joe Abley
On Sat, Dec 10, 2022 at 00:04, Paul Vixie wrote: > should be Rdata or RData but never RDATA. Also it turns out that RFC 8499 is probably not sufficient as a reference since it doesn't include definitions for most of those RRTypes, or RDATA, or Rdata, or RData. But I think the general idea mig