Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix

2018-06-27 Thread Paul Hoffman
Due to its nature, the document is a bit difficult to read, but I don't have any suggestion about how to make it better. The only problem I have with the document is that there are lots of informational references that are not referred to in the body of the text; they are not even listed in the

[DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix

2018-06-27 Thread Benno Overeinder
A number of reviewers of the accompanying draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf suggested to have both drafts WG Last Call reviewed in one go. We think this makes sense and the last version of the draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-01 is good for WG Last Call. This starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-

Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call on draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis

2018-06-27 Thread Dick Franks
The document appears to be in good shape. However, I have some difficulty with the wording of these two paragraphs in section 2. The basic wire format for names in the global DNS is a list of labels ordered by decreasing distance from the root, with the root label last. Each la