Due to its nature, the document is a bit difficult to read, but I don't
have any suggestion about how to make it better. The only problem I have
with the document is that there are lots of informational references
that are not referred to in the body of the text; they are not even
listed in the
A number of reviewers of the accompanying draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf
suggested to have both drafts WG Last Call reviewed in one go. We think
this makes sense and the last version of the
draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-01 is good for WG Last Call.
This starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-
The document appears to be in good shape.
However, I have some difficulty with the wording of these two paragraphs in
section 2.
The basic wire format for names in the global DNS is a list of
labels ordered by decreasing distance from the root, with the root
label last. Each la