2009/12/8 Benson Margulies :
> I did another big round of edits based on your responses to my questions.
And you've made quite a difference to the quality of what little we
have, thank you very much.
Ross
Ross,
I did another big round of edits based on your responses to my questions.
--benson
On Tue, Dec 8, 2009 at 9:26 AM, Ross Gardler
wrote:
> 2009/12/8 Benson Margulies :
>> I just submitted my first set of edits here. I adopted a fairly
>> high-handed attitude of rewriting to improve clarity
2009/12/8 Benson Margulies :
> I just submitted my first set of edits here. I adopted a fairly
> high-handed attitude of rewriting to improve clarity -- according to
> my ideas of clarity. If you all find it to be a train wreck just roll
> it back and tell me what you don't like, and I'll try again
