Re: [RFR] wml://CD/verify.html (was: Add extra page at /CD/verify.html)

2011-04-02 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot wrote: > I would propose to avoid the “we” form, diff and resulting file > attached, so I add the L10n English list in the loop to correct my > cheesy English, thanks in advance. (I wouldn't necessarily have bothered avoiding the "we" myself, but if it's consistently avoided elsewhere

[RFR] wml://CD/verify.html (was: Add extra page at /CD/verify.html)

2011-04-02 Thread David Prévot
Hi, Le 16/03/2011 13:54, Steve McIntyre a écrit : > With reference to > http://lists.debian.org/debian-cd/2011/03/msg00071.html, I've written > something up. > > wml attached, plus a diff to link it into /CD/index.html I hope. > > Please review / commit? I would propose to avoid the “we” form,