Re: Syntax issues in Policy Manual

2009-06-28 Thread Don Armstrong
On Mon, 29 Jun 2009, Jeremiah Foster wrote: > I understand why both you and Russ feel that way. But I would like > to respectfully disagree. I think you would find in practive this > might be an excellent opportunity for people to get involved. What's most important isn't that more people get invo

Re: Syntax issues in Policy Manual

2009-06-28 Thread Russ Allbery
Jeremiah Foster writes: > On Jun 26, 2009, at 19:00, Russ Allbery wrote: >>> "In all cases, the part of the field contents on the same line as the >>> field name, is empty." >> The second comma here *would* be a grammatical error. You cannot >> separate the noun from the verb with a comma. > N

Re: Syntax issues in Policy Manual

2009-06-28 Thread Jonathan Yu
Jeremiah: On that note, would you have some time (maybe later on) to work on producing a simple "annotated Debian Policy" applet? While a Wiki in itself might not be useful, Russ has mentioned that perhaps there is room for an Annotated Policy Manual. Importantly, though, we need to remind users

Re: Syntax issues in Policy Manual

2009-06-28 Thread Jeremiah Foster
On Jun 26, 2009, at 20:14, Russ Allbery wrote: The hard work is taking a proposal for a concrete change, thinking through all the implications, getting buy-in from the affected people, and then writing a section of Policy for it that clearly communicates the issue. Secondarily, we need more re

Re: Syntax issues in Policy Manual

2009-06-28 Thread Jeremiah Foster
On Jun 26, 2009, at 19:27, Steve Langasek wrote: On Fri, Jun 26, 2009 at 05:09:00PM +0200, Jeremiah Foster wrote: I am also cautious about wiki'ising this manual. I'd rather we go through a more cautious process of agreeing the wording and ensuring the detail is clear to all readers globally.

Re: Syntax issues in Policy Manual

2009-06-28 Thread Jeremiah Foster
On Jun 26, 2009, at 19:00, Russ Allbery wrote: "In all cases, the part of the field contents on the same line as the field name, is empty." The second comma here *would* be a grammatical error. You cannot separate the noun from the verb with a comma. Not according to Strunk and White. The

Re: Syntax issues in Policy Manual

2009-06-28 Thread Jonathan Yu
Russ: On Fri, Jun 26, 2009 at 10:40 PM, Russ Allbery wrote: > Jonathan Yu writes: > >> That is a very good point. I imagine that there are much more things >> proposed than there are people to properly review them and 'vote' on >> them. (well, to the extent that seconding things counts a vote) >