Following chals' modifications to the english manual, please find those 2
commits :
- http://live.debian.net/gitweb/?p=live-manual.git;a=commitdiff;h=71748f3
- http://live.debian.net/gitweb/?p=live-manual.git;a=commitdiff;h=a1b51d4
Feedback welcome
Olivier
On Tue, Sep 22, 2015 at 11:50 AM, wrote:
> chals:
>> Just one little thing. "Live Systems" as in "Live Systems Project"
>>(Capitalized) is a proper noun because it refers to the actual name of
>>a project. I suggest not to translate it at all or alternatively leave
>>it as "Projet Live Systems" i
chals:
> Just one little thing. "Live Systems" as in "Live Systems Project"
>(Capitalized) is a proper noun because it refers to the actual name of
>a project. I suggest not to translate it at all or alternatively leave
>it as "Projet Live Systems" if you think your readers will understand
>it bett
Hi
> titles are actually differents, english says Live Systems, french says Debian
> Live, please see:
>
> - English Manual title : " Live Systems Manual "
> http://live.debian.net/manual/git/html/live-manual.en.html
>
> Fr Manual title : " Manuel Debian Live "
> http://live.debian.net/manual
> leave it as "Projet Live Systems" if you think your readers will
understand
> it better that way.
titles are actually differents, english says Live Systems, french says
Debian Live, please see:
- English Manual title : "Live Systems Manual"
http://live.debian.net/manual/git/html/live-manual.en.
First proposed corrections for feedback before the push
as I was sweating to learn git process, i did not fully realize i was
adding another layer of corrections on your work Olivier
"Projet Live Systems" term used.
Focus on shorter sentences and fluid reading.
++
Philippe
2015-09-21 19:07 GMT+0
On Mon, Sep 21, 2015 at 5:23 PM, wrote:
> Hi,
> I've been through the translation of the live-boot man page that you can find
> here :
> http://live.debian.net/gitweb/?p=live-boot.git;a=commitdiff;h=94af924e683b59cba8e08ec6f958e055364eaeab
>
> As usual, feeback welcome.
> Olivier
>
Great job!
Hi,
I've been through the translation of the live-boot man page that you can find
here :
http://live.debian.net/gitweb/?p=live-boot.git;a=commitdiff;h=94af924e683b59cba8e08ec6f958e055364eaeab
As usual, feeback welcome.
Olivier
On Sun, Sep 20, 2015 at 8:11 PM, wrote:
> Hi,
> just to let you know that I had a go with the live manual :
> http://live.debian.net/gitweb/?p=live-manual.git;a=commitdiff;h=db2be39a1033362accfbd5424e2e0d85e120bebd
>
> Feedback welcome.
> Olivier
>
Excellent. I am really, really happy about it.
Hi,
just to let you know that I had a go with the live manual :
http://live.debian.net/gitweb/?p=live-manual.git;a=commitdiff;h=db2be39a1033362accfbd5424e2e0d85e120bebd
Feedback welcome.
Olivier
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