Re: FSF seeks comments on draft 1.2 of the FDL

2002-02-08 Thread Sunnanvind Fenderson
Hi, I just have a few comments right now, I'm sure the others will follow with more enlightening and constructive stuff than this. --- "The Document may contain no Invariant Sections." at line 62 - "The Document doesn't have to include any Invariant Sections" might be clearer, or something els

Re: FSF seeks comments on draft 1.2 of the FDL

2002-02-07 Thread Ben Pfaff
"Bradley M. Kuhn" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes: > Unified diff of FDL 1.1 and FDL 1.2: > http://www.gnu.org/licenses/fdl-1.1-to-1.2-draft.diff GNU wdiff might be a better choice of difference utilities, since its differences are based on words instead of lines, making it insensitive to para