Re: [Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

2013-02-14 Thread Moray Allan
On 2013-02-13 23:34, Justin B Rye wrote: I don't have write access for svn, but here's a diff. Thanks! I've committed these changes. -- Moray ___ Debconf-team mailing list Debconf-team@lists.debconf.org http://lists.debconf.org/mailman/listinfo/debc

Re: [Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

2013-02-14 Thread Jonathan Nieder
Justin B Rye wrote: > Or to quote the whole sentence, > # Having dedicated equipment for the DebConf video team has reduced > # the setup time and contributed to increas{e,ing} the quality of the > # recordings. [...] >> victory wrote: >>> is this right? [...] > the "to" here isn't th

Re: [Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

2013-02-14 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: > Quoting victory (victory@gmail.com): >> Index: video.tex >> -contributed to increase the quality of the recordings. >> +contributed to increasing the quality of the recordings. Or to quote the whole sentence, # Having dedicated equipment for the DebConf video team ha

Re: [Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

2013-02-14 Thread victory
On Wed, 13 Feb 2013 23:34:13 + Justin B Rye wrote: Index: video.tex -contributed to increase the quality of the recordings. +contributed to increasing the quality of the recordings. is this right? "to increase" and "increasing" seem correct here. -- victory no need to CC me :-) http://users

Re: [Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

2013-02-14 Thread Justin B Rye
Moray Allan wrote: > You can view the source files on the web at > http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/debconf-data/reports/dc12/ or "svn > checkout svn+ssh://svn.debian.org/svn/debconf-data" and make changes > directly. I don't have write access for svn, but here's a diff. -- JBR - and today's sing

Re: [Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

2013-02-14 Thread Victor Martinez
On Thu, Feb 14, 2013 at 12:09 AM, Christian PERRIER wrote: > Quoting victory (victory@gmail.com): >> On Wed, 13 Feb 2013 23:34:13 + >> Justin B Rye wrote: >> >> Index: video.tex >> -contributed to increase the quality of the recordings. >> +contributed to increasing the quality of the reco

Re: [Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

2013-02-13 Thread Christian PERRIER
Quoting victory (victory@gmail.com): > On Wed, 13 Feb 2013 23:34:13 + > Justin B Rye wrote: > > Index: video.tex > -contributed to increase the quality of the recordings. > +contributed to increasing the quality of the recordings. > > is this right? > "to increase" and "increasing" seem c

Re: [Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

2013-02-13 Thread Christian PERRIER
Quoting victory (victory@gmail.com): > On Wed, 13 Feb 2013 23:34:13 + > Justin B Rye wrote: > > Index: video.tex > -contributed to increase the quality of the recordings. > +contributed to increasing the quality of the recordings. > > is this right? > "to increase" and "increasing" seem c

[Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

2013-02-13 Thread Moray Allan
We should push out a release of the DebConf12 final report as soon as possible, so if you have time then please proof-read some (or all!) sections this week. Normally for this document we intentionally leave people's different styles of English in the report, even when those styles are a bit o