On Thu, 28 Sep 2006 01:04:04 +0200
Daniel Gerzo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Hello Tom,
>
> Thursday, September 28, 2006, 12:57:17 AM, you wrote:
>
> > On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 10:22:34 +0200
> > [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
>
> > Daniel,
>
> > Please just back this commit out. While I don't disagree
Hello Tom,
Thursday, September 28, 2006, 12:57:17 AM, you wrote:
> On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 10:22:34 +0200
> [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
> Daniel,
> Please just back this commit out. While I don't disagree with
> the commit, I do see at least one back out request. In the
> project, we back out after
On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 10:22:34 +0200
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
Daniel,
Please just back this commit out. While I don't disagree with
the commit, I do see at least one back out request. In the
project, we back out after a request if we are unable to change
the requester's mind. Leaving it in is ju
danger 2006-09-27 21:28:44 UTC
FreeBSD src repository (doc committer)
Modified files:
share/examples/mdoc example.4
Log:
Revert my previous change as it does not seem to be entirely correct and
popular.
Revision ChangesPath
1.27 +8 -6 src/share/examples/
On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 10:49:21AM +0200, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> Quoting Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
>
> >
> >No, we're arguing over grammar. The sentence currently renders as
> >something like:
> >
> > Alternatively, to load the fxp(4) as a module at boot time...
> >
>
> I proposed the
On Wednesday 27 September 2006 04:22, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
> Quoting Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
>
> > On Tue, Sep 26, 2006 at 07:59:52PM +, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> >> danger 2006-09-26 19:59:52 UTC
> >>
> >> FreeBSD src repository (doc committer)
> >>
> >> Modified file
On Wednesday 27 September 2006 04:45, Ceri Davies wrote:
> On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 04:15:26AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 08:53:14 +0100
> > Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> >
> > > On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 03:41:24AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > > > On Tue, 26 Sep 2006
On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 04:54:17AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
[...]
> > That's wrong. Getting rid of "the" works.
>
> I like "enable" in the first bit, and I'll agree "the" should
> go, even though your argument works in some cases but fails
> in others.
>
I think a common sense should apply here
On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 03:02:22AM -0600, Scott Long wrote:
> That said, attention to detail in the docs is _always_ appreciated,
> and good, open discussions are always welcomed. It's just a bit
> surrealistic to watch a grammar discussion happen between a group of
> non-native speakers at 3am
>From: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>Quoting Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
>
>> I don't agree to these changes, see below for details (also I don't see where
>> exactly you removed second person usage, it's still being used in the new
>> version).
>
>We want to aviod to use words like "you", "your"
On Tue, 2006-09-26 at 22:23 +0200, Christian Brueffer wrote:
> On Tue, Sep 26, 2006 at 07:59:52PM +, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> > danger 2006-09-26 19:59:52 UTC
> >
> > FreeBSD src repository (doc committer)
> >
> > Modified files:
> > share/examples/mdoc example.4
> > Log:
> >
Tom Rhodes wrote:
On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 03:02:22 -0600
Scott Long <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Daniel Gerzo wrote:
Quoting Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
No, we're arguing over grammar. The sentence currently renders as
something like:
Alternatively, to load the fxp(4) as a module at
On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 03:02:22 -0600
Scott Long <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Daniel Gerzo wrote:
>
> > Quoting Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
> >
> >>
> >> No, we're arguing over grammar. The sentence currently renders as
> >> something like:
> >>
> >> Alternatively, to load the fxp(4) as a
Daniel Gerzo wrote:
Quoting Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
No, we're arguing over grammar. The sentence currently renders as
something like:
Alternatively, to load the fxp(4) as a module at boot time...
I proposed the following change:
Alternatively, to load
.Ns Nm
module at boot
On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 10:37:33 +0200
Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 04:15:26AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 08:53:14 +0100
> > Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> >
> > > On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 03:41:24AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
>
On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 09:45:14 +0100
Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 04:15:26AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 08:53:14 +0100
> > Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> >
> > > On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 03:41:24AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > > > O
Quoting Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
No, we're arguing over grammar. The sentence currently renders as
something like:
Alternatively, to load the fxp(4) as a module at boot time...
I proposed the following change:
Alternatively, to load
.Ns Nm
module at boot time...
That's w
On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 04:15:26AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 08:53:14 +0100
> Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> > On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 03:41:24AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > > On Tue, 26 Sep 2006 22:23:39 +0200
> > > Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 04:15:26AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 08:53:14 +0100
> Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> > On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 03:41:24AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > > On Tue, 26 Sep 2006 22:23:39 +0200
> > > Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
Quoting Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
On Tue, Sep 26, 2006 at 07:59:52PM +, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
danger 2006-09-26 19:59:52 UTC
FreeBSD src repository (doc committer)
Modified files:
share/examples/mdoc example.4
Log:
Remove second person from the sentece and re
On Wed, 27 Sep 2006 08:53:14 +0100
Ceri Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 03:41:24AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > On Tue, 26 Sep 2006 22:23:39 +0200
> > Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> > > > | @@ -33,11 +33,9 @@
> > > > | .Nm example
> > > > | .Nd "ex
On Wed, Sep 27, 2006 at 03:41:24AM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> On Tue, 26 Sep 2006 22:23:39 +0200
> Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > > | @@ -33,11 +33,9 @@
> > > | .Nm example
> > > | .Nd "example device driver manual page"
> > > | .Sh SYNOPSIS
> > > | -To compile the
> > > | -.
On Tue, 26 Sep 2006 22:23:39 +0200
Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On Tue, Sep 26, 2006 at 07:59:52PM +, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> > danger 2006-09-26 19:59:52 UTC
> >
> > FreeBSD src repository (doc committer)
> >
> > Modified files:
> > share/examples/mdoc example
On Tue, Sep 26, 2006 at 10:23:39PM +0200, Christian Brueffer wrote:
> On Tue, Sep 26, 2006 at 07:59:52PM +, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> > danger 2006-09-26 19:59:52 UTC
> >
> > FreeBSD src repository (doc committer)
> >
> > Modified files:
> > share/examples/mdoc example.4
> > Log:
On Tue, Sep 26, 2006 at 07:59:52PM +, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> danger 2006-09-26 19:59:52 UTC
>
> FreeBSD src repository (doc committer)
>
> Modified files:
> share/examples/mdoc example.4
> Log:
> Remove second person from the sentece and rephrase a bit.
>
> Approved by:
danger 2006-09-26 19:59:52 UTC
FreeBSD src repository (doc committer)
Modified files:
share/examples/mdoc example.4
Log:
Remove second person from the sentece and rephrase a bit.
Approved by: trhodes (mentor), keramida (mentor)
Revision ChangesPath
1.26 +6
ru 2006-09-18 15:18:54 UTC
FreeBSD src repository
Modified files:
share/examples/mdoc example.4
Log:
Fix wording to what I intended originally.
Revision ChangesPath
1.25 +5 -4 src/share/examples/mdoc/example.4
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ru 2006-09-18 11:56:51 UTC
FreeBSD src repository
Modified files:
share/examples/mdoc example.4
Log:
- Avoid using second person.
- Demonstrate how .Nm can be used without the side effect of causing
a line break in the SYNOPSIS section.
Revision ChangesPath
brueffer2006-06-05 19:31:57 UTC
FreeBSD src repository
Modified files:(Branch: RELENG_6)
share/examples/mdoc example.4
Log:
MFC: rev. 1.23
Make this example more real world usable: When the manpage first appeared
is not interesting, when the driver appeared is.
brueffer2006-05-20 09:49:05 UTC
FreeBSD src repository
Modified files:
share/examples/mdoc example.4
Log:
Make this example more real world usable: When the manpage first appeared
is not interesting, when the driver appeared is. Most people who use this
example leave the m
brueffer2006-04-04 20:58:53 UTC
FreeBSD src repository
Modified files:(Branch: RELENG_6)
share/examples/mdoc example.4
Log:
MFC: rev. 1.22
Add a standard boilerplate to the SYNOPSIS section that mentions how
to load a kernel module.
Approved by:re (hrs)
brueffer2006-04-01 10:10:37 UTC
FreeBSD src repository
Modified files:
share/examples/mdoc example.4
Log:
Add a standard boilerplate to the SYNOPSIS section that mentions how
to load a kernel module.
MFC after: 3 days
Revision ChangesPath
1.22 +13 -1
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