[bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-08

2023-10-18 Thread Stephane Litkowski (slitkows)
Hi, Here is my last review (as WG chair) of the draft, I have also requested a GEN-ART review. Abstract: Use "RFC7432" as a plain text reference and not as a link (xml xtarget) in the abstract. Introduction: s/QOS/QoS/ I think this sentence is useless in the text as previous one already me

Re: [bess] WG adoption and IPR poll for draft-trr-bess-bgp-srv6-args-02

2023-10-18 Thread Matthew Bocci (Nokia)
WG, There is consensus to adopt this draft as a BESS WG document. Authors: please respond to the one comment form Bruno and upload a new version of the draft as draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-00. Thanks Matthew From: Matthew Bocci (Nokia) Date: Thursday, 28 September 2023 at 15:49 To: bess@ie

Re: [bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-08

2023-10-18 Thread Luc Andre Burdet (lburdet)
Thanks Stéphane, I am uploading v09 shortly. The missing references to i.e. LACP are actually in the MCLAG section and some of the “first expansions” you mention also : I think the best solution is to simply move Fig1 down into there. Let me know what you think Regards, Luc André Luc André Bu

[bess] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-09.txt

2023-10-18 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-09.txt is now available. It is a work item of the BGP Enabled ServiceS (BESS) WG of the IETF. Title: EVPN Port-Active Redundancy Mode Authors: Patrice Brissette Luc Andre Burdet Bin Wen Edward Leyton

Re: [bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-08

2023-10-18 Thread slitkows.ietf
I’m fine with changes. Thanks From: BESS On Behalf Of Luc Andre Burdet (lburdet) Sent: Wednesday, October 18, 2023 7:31 PM To: Stephane Litkowski (slitkows) ; draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh...@ietf.org Cc: bess-cha...@ietf.org; bess@ietf.org Subject: Re: [bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-