Thank you Jeffrey. These edits address my concerns. I believe they
also significantly improve document readability.
Yours,
Joel
On 11/30/2023 3:53 PM, Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang wrote:
Hi Joel,
We had offline exchanges and I just posted the -06 revision that addressed all
your comments:
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Hi Joel,
We had offline exchanges and I just posted the -06 revision that addressed all
your comments:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast/06/.
Thanks again for your thorough review and lots of comments - a great help in
improving the document quality.
Jeffrey
Jun
Hi Joel,
Thanks for your review and comments.
I will address them and come back.
Jeffrey
Juniper Business Use Only
-Original Message-
From: Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Sent: Monday, October 23, 2023 3:00 PM
To: gen-...@ietf.org
Cc: bess@ietf.org; draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast@ietf
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Not Ready
This is a requested genart early review of
draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-05
Prepared on 23-Oct-2023
Summary: This draft is not ready, having a number of issues that need to be
addressed.
I presume this draft will be socialized with the PIM and ID
