Re: [bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-08

2023-10-18 Thread slitkows.ietf
I’m fine with changes. Thanks From: BESS On Behalf Of Luc Andre Burdet (lburdet) Sent: Wednesday, October 18, 2023 7:31 PM To: Stephane Litkowski (slitkows) ; draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh...@ietf.org Cc: bess-cha...@ietf.org; bess@ietf.org Subject: Re: [bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess

Re: [bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-08

2023-10-18 Thread Luc Andre Burdet (lburdet)
Thanks Stéphane, I am uploading v09 shortly. The missing references to i.e. LACP are actually in the MCLAG section and some of the “first expansions” you mention also : I think the best solution is to simply move Fig1 down into there. Let me know what you think Regards, Luc André Luc André Bu

[bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-08

2023-10-18 Thread Stephane Litkowski (slitkows)
Hi, Here is my last review (as WG chair) of the draft, I have also requested a GEN-ART review. Abstract: Use "RFC7432" as a plain text reference and not as a link (xml xtarget) in the abstract. Introduction: s/QOS/QoS/ I think this sentence is useless in the text as previous one already me