[Anima] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17

2025-01-23 Thread Paul Kyzivat
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2025-01-30 IETF LC End Date: 2025-01-30 IESG Telechat date: ? Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. Disclaimer: This reviewer is

[Anima] Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17 RETRACTION

2025-01-23 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Sorry, please ignore this. It was sent by accident. On 1/23/25 11:13 AM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just

[Anima] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17

2025-01-27 Thread Paul Kyzivat
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2025-01-27 IETF LC End Date: 2025-01-30 IESG Telechat date: ? Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. This wa