Re: DIS: Re: BUS: proposal: fix judicial turns

2007-05-09 Thread Zefram
Michael Slone wrote: >It would be even clearer to write: I started out with that form, actually. I thought it was less clear, because it purports to make two amendments when the intention is actually to make only one. >There's no need for conditional edits here. It's conditional in any case; it

Re: DIS: Re: BUS: proposal: fix judicial turns

2007-05-09 Thread Michael Slone
On 5/8/07, Ed Murphy <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: Zefram wrote: > If possible, amend rule 1871 by replacing the text "if e was turned > when it was called" with "if e is turned". Otherwise, amend rule 1871 > by replacing the text "if e was not standing when it was called" with > "if e is not stan

DIS: Re: BUS: proposal: fix judicial turns

2007-05-08 Thread Ed Murphy
Zefram wrote: If possible, amend rule 1871 by replacing the text "if e was turned when it was called" with "if e is turned". Otherwise, amend rule 1871 by replacing the text "if e was not standing when it was called" with "if e is not standing". This would be clearer if worded as "If R1871 co