[Acme] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-acme-onion-02

2024-08-26 Thread Qin Wu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Qin Wu Review result: Has Nits I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments th

[Acme] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-acme-onion-05

2024-12-30 Thread Qin Wu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Qin Wu Review result: Has Nits I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments th