Thanks Tim for the review, that's really helpful! I'll give the draft a
once over with your comments in mind.
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Hi again TIm,
I've updated the editor's copy (
https://as207960.github.io/acme-onion/draft-ietf-acme-onion.html) with
your comments and fixed a few edit nits I found along the way.
A diff of the two can be viewed here:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=draft-ietf-acme-onion&url_2=https://AS