Hi,
Here is my shepherd review of draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification.
1. The working group consensus represents a strong concurrence of 7+
individuals with others being silent.
2-3. No controversy / discontent regarding particular points has been recorded.
4. There is an existing imple
Hi Göran,
Thanks a lot!
Regarding point 21 on the Expert Review Instructions, I think it would
read better if bullet 4 was merged into bullet 2 altogether.
I have made a proposal as a PR at [1]. Please have a look.
Best,
/Marco
[1] https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-revoked-token-notification/pu
Hi Marco,
> I think it would read better if bullet 4 was merged into bullet 2 altogether.
> I have made a proposal as a PR at [1].
Agree. Looks good. I suggested an editorial change in the same PR.
Göran
From: Marco Tiloca
Date: Friday, 2 June 2023 at 15:08
To: Göran Selander , Ace Wg ,
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Authentication and
Authorization for Constrained Environments (ACE) WG of the IETF.
Title : Notification of Revoked Access Tokens in the
Authentication and Auth
Hello ACE,
This revision addresses the comments from the Shepherd review [1] -
thanks Göran! - about avoiding repetitions in the instructions for the
Expert review in the IANA considerations.
Best,
/Marco
[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/mHpTsE-lDvzfMSt0cd-j_B-VknM/
On 2023-06-
Thanks Goran for the revision and Marco for addressing these comments.
Yours,
Daniel
From: Ace on behalf of Marco Tiloca
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Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-06.txt
Daniel Migault has requested publication of
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Please verify the document's state at
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