[nvo3] Gen-ART Early review of draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-10

[Paul Kyzivat]

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Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-10
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-08-27
IETF LC End Date: TBD
IESG Telechat date: TBD

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.


NIT:

Section 1.1.1 includes the following statement:

"The term "BIER OAM" used in this document interchangeably with longer 
version "set of OAM protocols, methods, and tools for BIER layer"."


But BIER is not used anywhere else in the document. Hence I think you 
can remove this. If you choose to retain it, then it needs to be defined.


Otherwise this document seems ready to go.

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[nvo3] I-D Action: draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-11.txt

[internet-drafts]

Internet-Draft draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-11.txt is now available. It is a
work item of the Network Virtualization Overlays (NVO3) WG of the IETF.

   Title:   OAM for use in GENEVE
   Authors: Greg Mirsky
Sami Boutros
David Black
Santosh Pallagatti
   Name:draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-11.txt
   Pages:   11
   Dates:   2024-08-27

Abstract:

   This document lists a set of general requirements for active OAM
   protocols in the Geneve overlay network.  Based on the requirements,
   IP encapsulation for active Operations, Administration, and
   Maintenance protocols in Geneve protocol is defined.  Considerations
   for using ICMP and UDP-based protocols are discussed.

The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam/

There is also an HTML version available at:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-11.html

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-11

Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts


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[nvo3] Re: Gen-ART Early review of draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-10

[Greg Mirsky]

Hi Paul,
thank you for your thorough review and helpful suggestion. I agree with you
and removed the sentence altogether. I uploaded the new version -11
.

Regards,
Greg

On Tue, Aug 27, 2024 at 9:52 AM Paul Kyzivat  wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>
> .
>
> Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-10
> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
> Review Date: 2024-08-27
> IETF LC End Date: TBD
> IESG Telechat date: TBD
>
> Summary:
>
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
> be fixed before publication.
>
> NIT:
>
> Section 1.1.1 includes the following statement:
>
> "The term "BIER OAM" used in this document interchangeably with longer
> version "set of OAM protocols, methods, and tools for BIER layer"."
>
> But BIER is not used anywhere else in the document. Hence I think you
> can remove this. If you choose to retain it, then it needs to be defined.
>
> Otherwise this document seems ready to go.
>
>
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