Re: New version of nm-step2

2003-08-18 Thread Anthony DeRobertis

On Sunday, Aug 17, 2003, at 19:50 US/Eastern, Andrew Suffield wrote:


I thought

   As a last resort, if you haven't received any offers for a
or

   As a last resort, if you didn't receive any offers for a

are the only acceptable forms in my Japanese junior high school days.


Both of these are valid on their own, but the latter conflicts with
the tense of the rest of the paragraph - "haven't received" is recent
past, "didn't receive" is distant past.


I didn't receive any replies by the deadline. [and can't now, because 
the deadline was yesterday]

I haven't received any replies. [Though I still may receive some]

"haven't received" is present perfect, no "recent past." A very nice 
tense, really.



"A few weeks after registering, if you still haven't received any
offers, then you can send e-mail to 
telling them precisely where you live (give the names of some big
cities close to you)."


Alternatively, "If you don't receive any offers within a few weeks of 
registering, then you may [not can, you always can]"


Now, "precisely" and some close big cities don't seem to fit together 
too well. Maybe, "...telling them precisely where you live as well as 
the closest major cities."




Re: New version of nm-step2

2003-08-18 Thread Anthony DeRobertis


On Monday, Aug 18, 2003, at 12:41 US/Eastern, Andrew Suffield wrote:


Alternatively, "If you don't receive any offers within a few weeks of
registering, then you may [not can, you always can]"


Always "may", too. I'm not sure this changes anything.


Well, you're saying something in that sentence. Maybe "registering, 
then please..."




Bug#250230: BSD link on Social Contract page goes to wrong BSD license

2004-05-21 Thread Anthony DeRobertis
Package: www.debian.org
Severity: normal

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The link to the BSD license under DFSG 10 goes to the revised BSD
license. The DFSG written before the revised license; it should go to
the original one with the advertising clause (unfortunately).


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