Harald, I think your version is too crowded. The ad should convey quickly what Sage is.
You gave some good criticism; here's another version: http://tinyurl.com/487hagz -- To post to this group, send an email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to sage-devel+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URL: http://www.sagemath.org