Hi Minh

> http://wiki.sagemath.org/DownloadGuide

Much better.

Excuse me if I now still have some comments.

1.
"When your computer boots, it probably displays a startup screen that 
indicates the name of your operating system."

I think that when you only distinguish between Windows/Linux/MacOSX, 
then people who don't yet know which operating system they are on, 
should not be allowed to use Sage. ;-)

This sentence is probably OK for Windows. No idea about MacOSX. But when 
I look at my (Linux) system while it boots, then I see soooooo many 
messages that I wouldn't be able to figure out the relevant text.

My conclusion is that this sentence is redundant. And it also somehow 
suggests to reboot the computer... What a waste of time.

My suggestion. Remove it.


2.
More subtle is the distinction between 32- and 64-bit. Wouldn't it be 
better to give a little instruction for each OS of how to figure out 
whether I'll have to choose the 32- or 64-bit version. Maybe you could 
provide a short script on the webpage that figures out the CPU type if 
the user is unsure.


3.
Could you make SPKG into a link to a *condensed* description of what an 
SPKG is. What I'd expect here is just that an SPKG is a bzip2 file of 
the relevant package data that follows certain conventions so that it 
justifies the new extension .spkg instead of .bz2.


Thank you for making it easier for newcomers.

Ralf

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