Thx Mahesh, I reviewed and validated your latest published -14 and that addressed all of my comments so consider the result 'Ready' now from YD perspective.
Thx /ebben On 2024-06-10 12:34:05, Mahesh Jethanandani wrote: > [External Email. Be cautious of content] > > > Hi Ebben, > > Thanks for reviewing the document. > > > On Jun 9, 2024, at 10:52 AM, Ebben Aries via Datatracker > <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > Reviewer: Ebben Aries > Review result: Ready with Nits > > This is a follow up review to prior -08 version ~3y back. Prior review > comments were addressed and it looks good from a YD standpoint. Only a > few > minor questions/clarifications below. > > 1 module in this draft: > - ietf-bfd-stabil...@2024-05-05.yang > > YANG compiler errors or warnings (pyang 2.6.0, yanglint 2.2.8) > - No compiler errors or warnings > > Module ietf-bfd-stabil...@2024-05-05.yang: > - I notice between -08 and -13 that `micro-bfd-ipv6` augments are now > removed. > Is this intentional? > > > Good catch. No, the work on this draft predates the final changes made to BFD > module. It was never added. Have done it now. > > > - For all augments that introduce the `lost-packet-count` leaf, these are > all > identical definitions which could leverage a single grouping/uses > definition. Any reason not to leverage? > > > Created the grouping and using it now. > > Thanks > > > > Example validated instance data: > > <interfaces xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-interfaces"> > <interface> > <name>et-0/0/0</name> > <type > xmlns:ianaift="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:iana-if-type"> > ianaift:ethernetCsmacd</type> > <oper-status>up</oper-status> <statistics> > > <discontinuity-time>2024-06-09T00:00:00.000+01:00</discontinuity-time> > </statistics> > </interface> > <interface> > <name>ae0</name> > <type > xmlns:ianaift="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:iana-if-type"> > ianaift:ieee8023adLag</type> > <oper-status>up</oper-status> <statistics> > > <discontinuity-time>2024-06-09T00:00:00.000+01:00</discontinuity-time> > </statistics> > </interface> > </interfaces> > <routing-state xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-routing"> > <ribs> > <rib> > <name>DEFAULT</name> > <address-family>ipv4</address-family> > </rib> > </ribs> > </routing-state> > <routing xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-routing"> > <control-plane-protocols> > <control-plane-protocol> > <type > xmlns:bfd-types="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-types"> > bfd-types:bfdv1</type> > <name>DEFAULT</name> <bfd xmlns= > "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd"> > <ip-sh xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-ip-sh"> > <sessions> > <session> > <interface>et-0/0/0</interface> > <dest-addr>10.1.1.1</dest-addr> > <authentication> > <meticulous>true</meticulous> > </authentication> > <session-statistics> > <lost-packet-count > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-stability">10</ > lost-packet-count> > </session-statistics> > <stability > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-stability">true</ > stability> > </session> > </sessions> > </ip-sh> > <ip-mh xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-ip-mh"> > <session-groups> > <session-group> > <source-addr>10.2.1.1</source-addr> > <dest-addr>10.1.1.1</dest-addr> > <authentication> > <meticulous>true</meticulous> > </authentication> > <rx-ttl>255</rx-ttl> > <sessions> > <session-statistics> > <lost-packet-count > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-stability">10 > </lost-packet-count> > </session-statistics> > </sessions> > <stability > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-stability">true</ > stability> > </session-group> > </session-groups> > </ip-mh> > <lag xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-lag"> > <sessions> > <session> > <lag-name>ae0</lag-name> > <authentication> > <meticulous>true</meticulous> > </authentication> > <use-ipv4>true</use-ipv4> > <member-links> > <member-link>et-0/0/0</member-link> > <micro-bfd-ipv4> > <session-statistics> > <lost-packet-count > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-stability"> > 10</lost-packet-count> > </session-statistics> > </micro-bfd-ipv4> > </member-links> > <stability > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-stability">true</ > stability> > </session> > </sessions> > </lag> > <mpls xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-mpls"> > <session-groups> > <session-group> > <mpls-fec>10.0.0.0/24</mpls-fec> > <authentication> > <meticulous>true</meticulous> > </authentication> > <sessions> > <session-statistics> > <lost-packet-count > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-stability">10 > </lost-packet-count> > </session-statistics> > </sessions> > <stability > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-bfd-stability">true</ > stability> > </session-group> > </session-groups> > </mpls> > </bfd> > </control-plane-protocol> > </control-plane-protocols> > </routing> > > > > > > > Mahesh Jethanandani > mjethanand...@gmail.com > > > > > >
