Tom, Minimally it updates one of the revision clauses, which I had missed. It's likely the one you're noting was an issue.
If you could respond to the other mail we can try to close off on the issues you're raising. -- Jeff > On Oct 21, 2021, at 6:21 PM, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Bidirectional Forwarding Detection WG of the > IETF. > > Title : Unsolicited BFD for Sessionless Applications > Authors : Enke Chen > Naiming Shen > Robert Raszuk > Reshad Rahman > Filename : draft-ietf-bfd-unsolicited-06.txt > Pages : 13 > Date : 2021-10-21 > > Abstract: > For operational simplification of "sessionless" applications using > BFD, in this document we present procedures for "unsolicited BFD" > that allow a BFD session to be initiated by only one side, and be > established without explicit per-session configuration or > registration by the other side (subject to certain per-interface or > per-router policies). > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-unsolicited/ > > There is also an htmlized version available at: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bfd-unsolicited-06 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bfd-unsolicited-06 > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >