Hi Anoop, et al.,
appreciate your check of the final version of the update to the draft.
Below is the new text as in the working version:
   One use of VXLAN is in data centers interconnecting VMs of a tenant.
   VXLAN addresses requirements of the Layer 2 and Layer 3 data center
   network infrastructure in the presence of VMs in a multi-tenant
   environment, discussed in section 3 [RFC7348], by providing Layer 2
   overlay scheme on a Layer 3 network.  Another use is as an
   encapsulation for Ethernet VPN [RFC8365].

   This document is written assuming the use of VXLAN for virtualized
   hosts and refers to VMs and VTEPs in hypervisors.  However, the
   concepts are equally applicable to non-virtualized hosts attached to
   VTEPs in switches.

Kind regards,
Greg

On Wed, Dec 19, 2018 at 6:28 AM Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Anoop,
> thank you for the great text you've contributed. Accepted. I'll update the
> working text and publish later today.
>
> Kind regards,
> Greg
>
> On Wed, Dec 19, 2018 at 5:19 AM Reshad Rahman (rrahman) <rrah...@cisco.com>
> wrote:
>
>> +1 to Anoop's comments. I've made similar comment to Greg privately, and
>> Anoop's proposed text clears things up.
>>
>> Regards,
>> Reshad (no hat).
>>
>> On 2018-12-19, 1:54 AM, "Rtg-bfd on behalf of Anoop Ghanwani" <
>> rtg-bfd-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of an...@alumni.duke.edu> wrote:
>>
>>     Hi Greg,
>>
>>     Yes this captures what I was trying to get added.
>>
>>     Perhaps the last sentence can be changed to:
>>
>>     "This document is written assuming the use of VXLAN for virtualized
>>     hosts and refers to VMs and VTEPs in hypervisors.  However, the
>>     concepts are equally applicable to non-virtualized hosts attached to
>>     VTEPs in switches."
>>
>>     Thanks,
>>     Anoop
>>
>>     On Tue, Dec 18, 2018 at 12:17 PM Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>     >
>>     > Hi Anoop,
>>     > thank you for your comments and the suggested text. To clarify the
>> extent of the update, would the following accurately reflect the change in
>> Introduction you're proposing:
>>     > OLD TEXT:
>>     >    VXLAN is typically deployed in data centers interconnecting
>>     >    virtualized hosts of a tenant.  VXLAN addresses requirements of
>> the
>>     >    Layer 2 and Layer 3 data center network infrastructure in the
>>     >    presence of VMs in a multi-tenant environment, discussed in
>> section 3
>>     >    [RFC7348], by providing Layer 2 overlay scheme on a Layer 3
>> network.
>>     > NEW TEXT:
>>     >   One use of VXLAN is in data centers interconnecting
>>     >   VMs of a tenant.  VXLAN addresses requirements of the
>>     >    Layer 2 and Layer 3 data center network infrastructure in the
>>     >    presence of VMs in a multi-tenant environment, discussed in
>> section 3
>>     >    of [RFC7348], by providing Layer 2 overlay scheme on a Layer 3
>> network.
>>     >    Another use is as an encapsulation for EVPN [RFC 8365].
>>     >
>>     >   In the remainder of this document the terms VM and End Station
>>     >   are used interchangeably.
>>     >
>>     > If my understanding of the proposed update is correct, I'd be glad
>> to use it (adding RFC 8365 as Informational reference).  Should note that
>> in the draft we never used "End Station". Perhaps the last sentence is not
>> required.
>>     >
>>     > What do you think?
>>     >
>>     > Regards,
>>     > Greg
>>     >
>>     > On Tue, Dec 18, 2018 at 10:08 AM Anoop Ghanwani <
>> an...@alumni.duke.edu> wrote:
>>     >>
>>     >> I would change the introduction to the following to mention the
>> use of
>>     >> VXLAN by BGP EVPN.
>>     >>
>>     >> Thanks,
>>     >> Anoop
>>     >>
>>     >> ==
>>     >>
>>     >>    "Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network" (VXLAN) [RFC7348]
>> provides
>>     >>    an encapsulation scheme that allows building an overlay network
>> by
>>     >>    decoupling the address space of the attached virtual hosts from
>> that
>>     >>    of the network.
>>     >>
>>     >>   One use of VXLAN is in data centers interconnecting
>>     >>   VMs of a tenant.  VXLAN addresses requirements of the
>>     >>    Layer 2 and Layer 3 data center network infrastructure in the
>>     >>    presence of VMs in a multi-tenant environment, discussed in
>> section 3
>>     >>    of [RFC7348], by providing Layer 2 overlay scheme on a Layer 3
>> network.
>>     >>    Another use is as an encapsulation for EVPN [RFC 8365].
>>     >>
>>     >>   In the remainder of this document the terms VM and End Station
>>     >>   are used interchangeably.
>>     >>
>>     >>    In the absence of a router in the overlay, a VM can communicate
>> with
>>     >>    another VM only if they are on the same VXLAN segment.  VMs are
>>     >>    unaware of VXLAN tunnels as a VXLAN tunnel is terminated on a
>> VXLAN
>>     >>    Tunnel End Point (VTEP) (hypervisor/TOR).  VTEPs
>> (hypervisor/TOR) are
>>     >>    responsible for encapsulating and decapsulating frames exchanged
>>     >>    among VMs.
>>     >>
>>     >> On Wed, Dec 12, 2018 at 6:02 AM Jeffrey Haas <jh...@pfrc.org>
>> wrote:
>>     >> >
>>     >> > BESS Working Group members,
>>     >> >
>>     >> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-04
>>     >> >
>>     >> > BFD has finished working group last call on BFD for Vxlan and is
>> about ready
>>     >> > to request publication as an RFC.  A last minute comment
>> suggested that we
>>     >> > should consider inviting comment from your working group for
>> expertise.
>>     >> >
>>     >> > We will be leaving the last call open until December 21 to leave
>> time for
>>     >> > final comments.
>>     >> >
>>     >> > -- Jeff (for BFD)
>>     >> >
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