On Wed, Jan 30, 2002 at 05:53:04PM -0800, Jos Backus wrote: > On Thu, Jan 24, 2002 at 06:19:56PM -0801, Jos Backus wrote: > > OK, I may need help with the markup part though, so I'll post a rough draft > > here first. > > Here's my first attempt at improving the documentation of the batch mode > feature. ... > +.IP "\fB--write-batch=PREFIX\fP" > +Generate a set of files that can be transferred as a batch update\&. Each > +filename in the set starts with \fBPREFIX\fP. > +.IP > +.IP "\fB--read-batch=PREFIX\fP" > +Apply a previously generated change batch, using the fileset whose filenames > +start with \fBPREFIX\fP\&.
Refer people to the BATCH MODE section for more details. ... > +Batch mode adds the ability to generate control information which describes > +the changes that need to be made in order to turn a source directory tree into > +a target directory tree. The opening description should be easily understandable by somebody who approaches it for the first time, and I don't think this fits the bill. I think it should describe why somebody would want to use it, then it can jump into the details about how it does it. ... > +Note that in addition to creating the batch control files, the write-batch > +option also makes the target directory tree identical to the source directory > +tree. I think "also performs the operations on the target" would be more accurate than saying it makes the target identical to the source; it depends on the other parameters. The rest looks good. - Dave Dykstra