> On Nov. 18, 2015, midnight, Michael Park wrote: > > docs/home.md, line 40 > > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/40242/diff/2/?file=1125051#file1125051line40> > > > > `s/for use by a role/for a role/`? `to be used by a role`?
Personally, I think "for use by a role" is the clearest way to phrase this. > On Nov. 18, 2015, midnight, Michael Park wrote: > > docs/reservation.md, lines 244-262 > > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/40242/diff/2/?file=1125053#file1125053line244> > > > > Do these backslashes need to be removed in order for copy/paste to work? Yes. - Neil ----------------------------------------------------------- This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: https://reviews.apache.org/r/40242/#review106960 ----------------------------------------------------------- On Nov. 13, 2015, 12:45 p.m., Neil Conway wrote: > > ----------------------------------------------------------- > This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: > https://reviews.apache.org/r/40242/ > ----------------------------------------------------------- > > (Updated Nov. 13, 2015, 12:45 p.m.) > > > Review request for mesos, Greg Mann and Michael Park. > > > Bugs: MESOS-2455 > https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-2455 > > > Repository: mesos > > > Description > ------- > > Improved docs for dynamic reservation HTTP endpoints. > > > Diffs > ----- > > docs/home.md 7aa785e9ae07f2cc14eb0f1108ae4ab4c8748599 > docs/persistent-volume.md 0951ccb69daaa19b959e11cf3bf972a674a58305 > docs/reservation.md 81f21c3755b216b0932876c1ddd9de4d3fbe814a > > Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/40242/diff/ > > > Testing > ------- > > > Thanks, > > Neil Conway > >
