Yida Wu has posted comments on this change. ( 
http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/21615 )

Change subject: IMPALA-13142: [DOCS] Documentation for Impala StateStore & 
Catalogd HA
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Patch Set 1:

(14 comments)

Looks good to me, some minor issues.

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/impala.ditamap
File docs/impala.ditamap:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/impala.ditamap@67
PS1, Line 67: impala_HA
better to use lowercase letters.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/impala.ditamap@68
PS1, Line 68: impala_HA_statestore
better to use lowercase letters.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/impala.ditamap@69
PS1, Line 69: impala_HA_catalog
better to use lowercase letters.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA.xml
File docs/topics/impala_HA.xml:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA.xml@21
PS1, Line 21: impala_HA
It seems we prefer to use lowercase letters "impala_ha" for the titles. Maybe 
good to follow it. Also the file name "impala_HA.xml", maybe good to change to 
"impala_ha.xml"


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_catalog.xml
File docs/topics/impala_HA_catalog.xml:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_catalog.xml@22
PS1, Line 22: impala_HA_catalog
better to use lowercase letters for titles.
impala_ha_catalog and impala_ha_catalog.xml


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_catalog.xml@23
PS1, Line 23:
nit. unnecessary spaces, same below


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_catalog.xml@49
PS1, Line 49: enabling_catalog_HA
better to use lowercase letters for ids.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_catalog.xml@63
PS1, Line 63: disabling_catalog_HA
better to use lowercase letters for ids.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_catalog.xml@76
PS1, Line 76: monitoring_status_HA
better to use lowercase letters for ids.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_statestore.xml
File docs/topics/impala_HA_statestore.xml:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_statestore.xml@22
PS1, Line 22: impala_HA_statestore
better to use lowercase letters for titles.
impala_ha_statestore and impala_ha_statestore.xml


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_statestore.xml@23
PS1, Line 23:
nit. unnecessary spaces, same below


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_statestore.xml@49
PS1, Line 49: enabling_statestore_HA
better to use lowercase letters for ids.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_statestore.xml@63
PS1, Line 63: Existing
I don't like using 'Existing' and 'New' flags because I doubt this document 
will update in the next version to remove those terms. It might be better to 
simply specify which configurations to set.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/21615/1/docs/topics/impala_HA_statestore.xml@76
PS1, Line 76: disabling_statestore_HA
better to use lowercase letters for ids.



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