Hi Russ, Thanks for your review.
On Tue, Feb 04, 2025 at 01:45:03PM -0800, Russ Housley via Datatracker wrote: > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review result: Ready > > I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing > effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These > comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Security Area > Directors. Document authors, document editors, and WG chairs should > treat these comments just like any other IETF Last Call comments. > > Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search-14 > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review Date: 2025-02-05 > IETF LC End Date: 2025-02-17 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > > Major Concerns: None. > > > Minor Concerns: > > Section 1: The text talks about "RIR Whois services". Is there a reference > for this? If not, would a reference to RFC 3912 be appropriate? Yep, RFC 3912 is a good reference for this. The document has been updated to include that. > Section 3.4: The document says: > > ~~~ > This is acceptable, because this behaviour: > > does not conflict with the current description of the link > relation; and > > is not generally applicable, but instead limited to the context of > RDAP INR objects only. > ~~~ > > I have two comments. First, it is unclear to me what "This" is referencing. > Second, the formatting is a bit confusing. Maybe bullets would resolve this > concern. This text has now been removed, since the "up" link relation is no longer used, due to feedback from other reviewers. > Nits: > > Section 6: Bullets in the first paragraph would be helpful. Thanks, updated. -Tom _______________________________________________ regext mailing list -- regext@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to regext-le...@ietf.org
