Hi Erik, Thanks for pointing these out, I have fixed them in the working copy.
G. > On 7 Dec 2024, at 06:49, Erik Kline via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > > Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-17: Yes > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/__;!!PtGJab4!92SUOQAmUHSfOs2wXMkC_7DtXGHlJgePinW2j1F8N8Tkwvax6WFxdawqJbC23MH7OaRxw8mELiii-8fOE2ojVgk$ > [ietf[.]org] > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl/__;!!PtGJab4!92SUOQAmUHSfOs2wXMkC_7DtXGHlJgePinW2j1F8N8Tkwvax6WFxdawqJbC23MH7OaRxw8mELiii-8fOSaAOu9Y$ > [datatracker[.]ietf[.]org] > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > # Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-17 > CC @ekline > > * comment syntax: > - > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md__;!!PtGJab4!92SUOQAmUHSfOs2wXMkC_7DtXGHlJgePinW2j1F8N8Tkwvax6WFxdawqJbC23MH7OaRxw8mELiii-8fO2_yoFHY$ > [github[.]com] > > * "Handling Ballot Positions": > - > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/__;!!PtGJab4!92SUOQAmUHSfOs2wXMkC_7DtXGHlJgePinW2j1F8N8Tkwvax6WFxdawqJbC23MH7OaRxw8mELiii-8fOvXy_o0M$ > [ietf[.]org] > > ## Nits > > ### S1.2.2.1, S1.2.2.2, S1.2.2.4 > > * Should the closing tag be "</ttl:ttl>"? > > ### S2.1.1.1, S2.1.1.2, S2.2.1 > > * Unless EPP has standardized not following RFC 5952 S4.3, the IPv6 address > should be lower-cased ("2001:db8::8:800:200c:417a"). > > -- Gavin Brown Principal Engineer, Global Domains & Strategy Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) https://www.icann.org _______________________________________________ regext mailing list -- regext@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to regext-le...@ietf.org
