Hi Jasdip and Tom, I think this is a really well done draft.
I have the following comments: 1. The registrations in the IANA section run together. I would be easier to distinguish the individual registrations if they were numbered and the bullet points were nested, or some other visual property that separates them. 2. The mention of "lookup URL" in Section 5 and Section 7 could use a reference to Section 3.1 of RFC 9082 as you have done section 4.1 of your draft. 3. The search pattern for autnums?handle in section 2.3 says that the pattern is up to each "registration provider". Does that mean each RIR? This does not seem to be very predictable for a client in that it needs to know, somehow, the search pattern of the server. Could you define the search pattern, as is specified in Section 4.1 of RFC 9082? Or maybe reference Section 4.1 of RFC 9082? -andy On Fri, Jul 12, 2024 at 2:18 PM James Galvin <gal...@elistx.com> wrote: > > The document editors have indicated that the following document is ready for > submission to the IESG to be considered for publication as a Best Current > Practice: > > RDAP RIR Search > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search/09/ > > This document has been through WGLC previously. However, a number of > questions arose and changes were made that are considered material and thus > we are proceeding with this additional WGLC. > > Please indicate your support or no objection for the publication of this > document by replying to this message on list (a simple “+1” is sufficient). > > If any working group member has questions regarding the publication of this > document please respond on the list with your concerns by close of business > everywhere, Friday, 2 August 2024. This WGLC has been extended to 3 weeks > because of the IETF120 meeting. > > If there are no objections the document will be submitted to the IESG. > > The Document Shepherd for this document is Mario Loffredo. > > Thanks, > > Antoin and Jim > REGEXT WG Co-Chairs > > _______________________________________________ > regext mailing list -- regext@ietf.org > To unsubscribe send an email to regext-le...@ietf.org _______________________________________________ regext mailing list -- regext@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to regext-le...@ietf.org
