The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9537,
"Redacted Fields in the Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Response".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid8004

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: James Gould <jgo...@verisign.com>

Section: GLOBAL

Original Text
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This document describes a Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP)
extension for specifying methods of redaction of RDAP responses and
explicitly identifying redacted RDAP response fields, using JSONPath
as the default expression language.



Corrected Text
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This document describes a Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP)
extension for specifying methods of redaction of RDAP responses and
explicitly identifying redacted RDAP response fields.


Notes
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The Abstract and the first sentence of the Introduction is "This document 
describes a Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) extension for specifying 
methods of redaction of RDAP responses and explicitly identifying redacted RDAP 
response fields, using JSONPath as the default expression language.".  This 
sentence is combining two aspects into a single sentence ("explicitly 
identifying redacted RDAP response fields" and "using JSONPath as the default 
expression language") incorrectly.  It is true that the extension is 
"explicitly identifying redacted RDAP response fields" and it's true that 
extension is "using JSONPath as the default expression language", but the 
expression languages are optional and the use of JSONPath as the default 
expression language is not relevant for the Abstract and first sentence of the 
Introduction.  The recommended change is to remove the  ", using JSONPath as 
the default expression language" from the sentences to correct it, resulting in:

"This document describes a Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) extension 
for specifying methods of redaction of RDAP responses and explicitly 
identifying redacted RDAP response fields."

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RFC9537 (draft-ietf-regext-rdap-redacted-16)
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Title               : Redacted Fields in the Registration Data Access Protocol 
(RDAP) Response
Publication Date    : March 2024
Author(s)           : J. Gould, D. Smith, J. Kolker, R. Carney
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Registration Protocols Extensions
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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