Dear Gavin.
Thanks for including the clarifications for the host-as-attributes
model!

I reviewed the document and found two problems:

- in 1.2 second point, and in 1.2.2 second paragraph, the reference
  to "Section 1.3 of [RFC6895]" for the record type format is wrong.
  There's no 1.3 section. I think you mean 3.1.

- in 1.2.2.1, the last words 'using a 2004 "Parameter value range"
  error.' should be in the first paragraph, not the second! I think
  the error refers to the rejection of ttl values for A/AAAA in
  domain objects that uses host objects.

Thanks and regards,

Hugo Salgado

On 17:26 14/12, Gavin Brown wrote:
> Greetings all,
> 
> I have just uploaded draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-04.
> 
> Notable changes in this version:
> 
> * The "for" attribute is now an enumeration, and can take the following 
> values: NS, DS, DNAME, A, AAAA, custom.
> 
> * If the "for" attribute is "custom", then the "custom" attribute can be used 
> to specify a DNS record type other than those above. However, it still has to 
> match the regular expression from RFC 6895 and still has to be registered 
> with IANA.
> 
> * <ttl> elements - in responses only - must have the "min", "default" and 
> "max" attributes. I'm open to feedback about making them mandatory but I 
> think they are so useful to clients that there would have to be a pretty 
> compelling reason to remove the "required" XSD property.
> 
> This version also closes off the backlog of changes I had planned, so unless 
> the WG has more feedback, I think this draft is basically done from a 
> functional perspective I will however require to complete the Implementation 
> Status section to get to the RFC publication stage.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> > On 14 Dec 2023, at 17:06, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote:
> > 
> > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-04.txt is now available. It is a 
> > work
> > item of the Registration Protocols Extensions (REGEXT) WG of the IETF.
> > 
> >   Title:   Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) mapping for DNS 
> > Time-To-Live (TTL) values
> >   Author:  Gavin Brown
> >   Name:    draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-04.txt
> >   Pages:   21
> >   Dates:   2023-12-14
> > 
> > Abstract:
> > 
> >   This document describes an extension to the Extensible Provisioning
> >   Protocol (EPP) that allows EPP clients to manage the Time-To-Live
> >   (TTL) value for domain name delegation records.
> > 
> > About this draft
> > 
> >   This note is to be removed before publishing as an RFC.
> > 
> >   The source for this draft, and an issue tracker, may can be found at
> >   https://github.com/gbxyz/epp-ttl-extension
> > 
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl/
> > 
> > There is also an HTMLized version available at:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-04
> > 
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-04
> > 
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
> > rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
> > 
> > 
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> --
> Gavin Brown
> Principal Engineer, Global Domains & Strategy
> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
> 
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