> Le 29 nov. 2021 à 09:01, Lars Eggert via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> a > écrit : > > Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis-04: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > DOWNREF [RFC3339] from this Internet Standard to Proposed Standard RFC3339, > which already was in RFC7484, so no action now I guess.
<MB>no action taken</MB> > > DOWNREF [RFC5396] from this Internet Standard to Proposed Standard RFC5396, > which was added in this doc but seems fully OK. Given the content of RFC5396, > we should add it to the DOWNREF registry I think. <MB>no action taken on my side</MB> > > Thanks to Joel Halpern for their General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review > (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/G7JSzW2J05YJ9gh1NO1FY1TLf78). > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- > All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose > to > address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by > automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there > will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you > did with these suggestions. > > Section 1. , paragraph 3, nit: >> on the existing entries of the above mentioned registries. An RDAP client fe >> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > The adjective "above-mentioned" is spelled with a hyphen. <MB>Done in -05</MB> > > Section 8. , paragraph 4, nit: >> nts, where the first ARRAY-VALUE is a an entry-list and the second ARRAY-VAL >> ^^^^ > Two determiners in a row. Choose either "a" or "an". <MB>Done in -05</MB> > > Uncited references: [RFC7071]. > <MB>RFC7071 is referenced in the Acknowledgements section, so no action taken</MB> Regards, Marc.
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