Thank you, Jim and co-authors,

This is needed, and hopefully this I-D could be published as an RFC sooner 
rather than later.

I think that the text explaining the special treatment for jCard should be made 
generic. Currently, it appears that only jCard uses the position in the array 
to signal the type of information, but RDAP is extensible, and some extension 
may be doing or decide to use the same approach as jCard.

For example:

Original:

The Redaction by Removal Method can be done for all RDAP response fields other 
than the JSON arrays used with jCard [RFC7095]

Suggestion:

The Redaction by Removal Method can be done for all RDAP response fields other 
than response fields using the position in an array to signal the type of 
information (e.g., the JSON arrays used with jCard [RFC7095]).

Original:

The Redaction by Removal Method MUST NOT be used to remove a field from a jCard 
[RFC7095] fixed array position, which will result in a non-conformant jCard 
[RFC7095] array definition.

Suggestion:

The Redaction by Removal Method MUST NOT be used to remove a field from a 
response field using the position in an array to signal the type of information 
(e.g., jCard [RFC7095] fixed array position, which removal of an individual 
data field will result in a non-conformant jCard [RFC7095] array definition).

Original:

The Redaction by Empty Value Method SHOULD be used only when redacting JSON 
response fields that use jCard [RFC7095] arrays.

Suggestion:

The Redaction by Empty Value Method SHOULD be used only when redacting JSON 
response fields that use the position in an array to signal the type of 
information (e.g., jCard [RFC7095] arrays).

Thank you,
Gustavo

On 7/12/21, 04:03, "regext on behalf of Gould, James" <regext-boun...@ietf.org 
on behalf of jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

    The "Redacted Fields in the Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) 
Response" draft-gould-regext-rdap-redacted has been published.  The goal of the 
draft is to describe an RDAP extension for explicitly identifying redacted RDAP 
response fields, using JSONPath as the default expression language.  Any review 
and feedback is welcome.

    Thanks,

    -- 

    JG



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    On 7/12/21, 6:47 AM, "internet-dra...@ietf.org" <internet-dra...@ietf.org> 
wrote:

        A new version of I-D, draft-gould-regext-rdap-redacted-00.txt
        has been successfully submitted by James Gould and posted to the
        IETF repository.

        Name:           draft-gould-regext-rdap-redacted
        Revision:       00
        Title:          Redacted Fields in the Registration Data Access 
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        Document date:  2021-07-12
        Group:          Individual Submission
        Pages:          24
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        Abstract:
           This document describes an RDAP extension for explicitly identifying
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           expression language.




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