Scott

Thank you for your reply, look below for EV>

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From: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenb...@verisign.com>
Date: Thursday, 18 February 2021 at 16:54
To: Eric Vyncke <evyn...@cisco.com>, "i...@ietf.org" <i...@ietf.org>
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Subject: RE:  Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02: 
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    [SAH] [snip]

    > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    > COMMENT:
    > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    > 
    > Thank you for the work put into this document. I found the document clear
    > and easy to read.
    > 
    > Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would
    > be appreciated), and some nits.
    > 
    > I hope that this helps to improve the document,
    > 
    > Regards,
    > 
    > -éric
    > 
    > == COMMENTS ==
    > 
    > -- Section 2 --
    > Please use BCP14 template (cfr RFC 8714).

    [SAH] Will fix.

    > -- Section 3.1.1 --
    > CIDR RFC 4632 only applies to IPv4... and also uses the words 'prefix 
length'
    > rather than 'bitmask length'.

    [SAH] Do you know of an appropriate reference for IPv6? I can change 
"bitmask length" to "prefix length".

EV> let's use indeed 'prefix length" as it is also used in RFC 4632

    > "2001:db8::0" is not following the RFC 5952 that is RECOMMENDED just a
    > couple of paragraphs above ;-)

    [SAH] Please explain. What's needed for a fix?

EV> simply use "2001:db8::" ;-)


    > == NITS ==
    > 
    > Like Ben Kaduk, I wonder why using a 16-bit value for US-ASCII "('*', 
US-ASCII
    > value 0x002A)"...

    [SAH] Will fix.

    Scott

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