> -----原始邮件-----
> 发件人: "Russ Housley via Datatracker" <nore...@ietf.org>
> 发送时间: 2019-10-10 23:02:57 (星期四)
> 收件人: sec...@ietf.org
> 抄送: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration....@ietf.org, i...@ietf.org,
> regext@ietf.org
> 主题: Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11
>
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Has Issues
>
> I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Security Area
> Directors. Document authors, document editors, and WG chairs should
> treat these comments just like any other IETF Last Call comments.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2019-10-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-15
> IESG Telechat date: 2019-10-17
>
Dear Russ Housley.
Thanks a lot for your kind review.
> Summary: Has Issues
>
>
> Major Concerns:
>
> The Abstract ans Section 1 say: "This is a non-standard proprietary
> extension." I understand that this is not a standards track document, so
> the "non-standard" part makes sense.
yes, the WG decided that this document is informational.
> However, what is the point of
> publishing a "proprietary" extension as an RFC. I would hope that
> interoperable implementations is the goal of publication.
>
If the registry follows this document, both registry and its all registrars
should follow this document.
Yes, interoperable implementation is very important.
> In Section 1, the use of "policy-wise" is unclear. Is this registration
> policy or something else?
>
How about
Policy-wise bundling --->
Bundling based on policy
>
> Minor Concerns:
>
> None.
>
>
> Nits:
>
> Section 1: s/label(LABEL)/label (LABEL)/
> - s/(V-tld);/(V-tld)./
>
will update it.
Thanks a lot.
Jiankang Yao
> In addition, there are several places in the upper left corner of the
> title page:
> Internet Engineering Task Force
>
>
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