Thanks, Jiankang. On one point only:
>> The SecDir review suggested changing the contact for the IANA >> registrations to the IETF, rather than the authors, and I agree: it >> should be “the IETF”, probably with the regext mailing list as the >> contact information. You did not make any change. Please do. >> >> You also did not address my comment about needing an explanation for >> why this is Informational and not Proposed Standard. It’s fine for it >> to be Informational, but the shepherd writeup needs to explain why >> (please update it), and the Introduction probably should also, >> assuming that reason has to do with the deployment, applicability, or >> maturity of what’s documented here. > > Yao: In the section "IANA Considerations" , we will add the following > sentence > > " This document describes a non-standard EPP > extension, so that the registrant contact will use author's address under the > REGEXT WG's guidance." I don't think that's where you should put it, and at this point I don't think you need to make any change to the IANA Considerations. As I said in my note in response to you and Antoin: > The explanation that > this is a proprietary extension and where it comes from needs to be in > the Introduction (early in the Introduction). I would also mention it > in the abstract (change "This document describes an extension" to > something like, "This document describes a non-standard proprietary > extension"). In addition to the change I suggest above to the Abstract, I would like to see a change to this paragraph in the Introduction: In order to meet the above requirements of strict bundled name registration, this document describes an extension of the EPP domain name mapping [RFC5731] for the provisioning and management of bundled names. To start with, I'd like it to say "describes a non-standard proprietary extension". But then I'd like to see another sentence after what's above, which says a little more about where the proprietary extension comes from, and a work about its deployment (is it limited to certain environments, certain companies, certain registries/registrars, certain countries?). This should be easy: we're only talking about a few sentences. Barry _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
