Dear Linlin, Yes, that looks fine to me.
-Benjamin On Tue, Dec 04, 2018 at 10:59:22AM +0800, Linlin Zhou wrote: > Dear Benjamin, > As some definitions are specified in the draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis, I > suggest removing "which are not formally defined" and making following > changes in the first section. Does that work for you? > > In the business model of domain registration, we usually have three roles of > entities: a registrant, a registrar and a registry, as defined in section 9 > of [draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis]. There may be other roles of entities > involved in the domain registration process, such as resellers, DNS operators > in section 9 of [draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis], privacy proxies, etc. > > A domain reseller is an individual or a company that acts as an agent for > accredited registrars. DNS operator is defined in section 9 of > [draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis]. A privacy proxy is an entity used for > domain registrations to protect the private information of the individuals > and organizations. These kind of entities are defined as "organizations" with > different role types in this document. > > Regards, > Linlin > > > Linlin Zhou > > From: Hollenbeck, Scott > Date: 2018-12-03 21:12 > To: 'zhoulin...@cnnic.cn'; 'ka...@mit.edu'; 'i...@ietf.org' > CC: 'regext-cha...@ietf.org'; 'pieter.vandepi...@dnsbelgium.be'; > 'regext@ietf.org'; 'draft-ietf-regext-org-...@ietf.org' > Subject: Re: [regext] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on > draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-10: (with COMMENT) > Works for me if it addresses Ben’s comment. > > Scott > > From: regext <regext-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Linlin Zhou > Sent: Monday, December 03, 2018 3:42 AM > To: Hollenbeck, Scott <shollenb...@verisign.com>; Benjamin Kaduk > <ka...@mit.edu>; iesg <i...@ietf.org> > Cc: regext-chairs <regext-cha...@ietf.org>; Pieter Vandepitte > <pieter.vandepi...@dnsbelgium.be>; regext <regext@ietf.org>; > draft-ietf-regext-org-ext <draft-ietf-regext-org-...@ietf.org> > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on > draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-10: (with COMMENT) > > Dear Scott, > Thanks for your comments. Please review if the following changes are workable > for you. > > > In the business model of domain registration, we usually have three roles of > entities: a registrant, a registrar and a registry, as defined in section 9 > of [draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis]. There may be other roles of entities > involved in the domain registration process, such as resellers, DNS operators > in section 9 of [draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis], privacy proxies, etc. > > > A domain reseller is an individual or a company that acts as an agent for > accredited registrars. DNS operator is defined in section 9 of > [draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis]. A privacy proxy is an entity used for > domain registrations to protect the private information of the individuals > and organizations. These kind of entities are defined as "organizations" with > different role types in this document. > > Regards, > Linlin > > > Linlin Zhou > > From: Hollenbeck, Scott > Date: 2018-11-30 20:15 > To: 'ka...@mit.edu'; 'i...@ietf.org' > CC: 'regext-cha...@ietf.org'; 'pieter.vandepi...@dnsbelgium.be'; > 'regext@ietf.org'; 'draft-ietf-regext-org-...@ietf.org' > Subject: RE: [regext] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on > draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-10: (with COMMENT) > > -----Original Message----- > > From: regext <regext-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Benjamin Kaduk > > Sent: Thursday, November 29, 2018 10:07 PM > > To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org> > > Cc: regext-cha...@ietf.org; pieter.vandepi...@dnsbelgium.be; > > regext@ietf.org; draft-ietf-regext-org-...@ietf.org > > Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf- > > regext-org-ext-10: (with COMMENT) > > > > Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for > > draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-10: No Objection > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org-ext/ > > > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > COMMENT: > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > Thank you for addressing my Discuss points! > > > > [Original Comment section preserved below] > > > > Section 1 > > > > In the business model of domain registration, we usually have 3 roles > > of entities: a registrant, a registrar and a registry. There may be > > other roles of entities involved in the domain registration process > > which are not formally defined, such as resellers, DNS service > > operators, privacy proxies, etc. > > > > nit: Perhaps I am misreading, but are we not going to formally define > > these entities in the next paragraph (in which case "yet" might be worth > > adding)? > > If definitions are needed, it may make sense to cite those described in > draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis. The Datatracker says it's in the RFC > Editor's AUTH48 state, so it should be available as an RFC in a matter of > days. > > Scott _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
