Dear Stewart, Thanks for your review. Please see my feedbacks below. Regards, Linlin
Linlin Zhou From: Stewart Bryant Date: 2018-10-09 00:52 To: gen-...@ietf.org CC: draft-ietf-regext-org.all; ietf; regext Subject: [regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-regext-org-10 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2018-10-08 IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-08 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This is a well written document, and ready for publication. Major issues: None Minor issues: The RFC 2718 normative reference is a bit strange to one that does not normally work in this area. RFC 2718 has been obsoleted, and this is covered by it being called out in the IETF LC. However RFC 2718 is called out because the text requires a reference to UTF-16, and there is apparently no reference to it other than the obsolete RFC 2718 text. This makes me wonder why this document requires support of the format. [Linlin] Sorry. It should be RFC2781 and will be moved to "Informative References". Perhaps a comment on this might be useful to other puzzled readers. In Section 3.6 the text says: "Loops SHOULD be prohibited." [Linlin] Will be modified as "MUST". I am surprised this is not a MUST, since SHOULD means that clients need to make the test whenever they used the repository and were worried about this, whereas MUST would mean that the server makes the test once. Nits/editorial comments: Nits points out an issue with the RFC2119 boiler plate and also a line too long, but these will be fixed by the RFC Editor as a matter of course. [Linlin] I found there are two lines are two long. They will be put into two lines, like, S: <msg lang="en">Command completed successfully; S: action pending</msg> _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
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