Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-06: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-launchphase/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- This is a well written document. I have several clarifying questions and comments that you should consider. 2.3. Launch Phases The server MAY support multiple launch phases sequentially or simultaneously. The <launch:phase> element MUST be included by the client to define the target launch phase of the command. The server SHOULD validate the phase and MAY validate the sub-phase of the <launch:phase> element against the active phase and OPTIONAL sub- phase of the server, and return an EPP error result code of 2306 if there is a mismatch. Is there a registry for codes like 2306? Either way, I couldn't figure out if this is a new code or already assigned one. 2.4. Status Values Each status value MAY be accompanied by a string of human-readable text that describes the rationale for the status applied to the object. The OPTIONAL "lang" attribute MAY be present to identify the language if the negotiated value is something other than the default value of "en" (English). You need to have a Normative Reference to Language Tags here (RFC 5646). Nit on page 19: Typo: identifer --> identifier Nit on page 47: <!-- Enumeration of for launch phase values. --> Drop "for"? _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
