None for me; 3 Tried to like the haiku style; 7 Much prefer sonnets. 5
(I this meter 4 A real haiku type meter? 7 Or just a miss?) 4 It's back to the lab or to the sonnet refuge for you, PATRICK MOORE Five beats in the first The second line is seven And then five again On Apr 19, 6:27 pm, PATRICK MOORE <bertin...@gmail.com> wrote: > None for me; > Tried to like the haiku style; > Much prefer sonnets. > > (I this meter > A real haiku type meter? > Or just a miss?) > > I much prefer the sonnet's lovely form; > Elegant, and spare, without unlovely haste. > The trouble is, you have to make it rhyme > And that's not easy without a lot of waste > ...Ed toil and endless spending of your time. > > So I will from this foolish effort quit; > Sit back and see what y'all do make of it. > > Patrick Moore > Albuquerque, NM > For professional resumes, contact > Patrick Moore, ACRW at patrickmo...@resumespecialties.com > > A billion stars go spinning through the night > Blazing high above your head; > But in you is the Presence that will be > When all the stars are dead. > (Rilke, Buddha in Glory) -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "RBW Owners Bunch" group. To post to this group, send email to rbw-owners-bunch@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to rbw-owners-bunch+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/rbw-owners-bunch?hl=en.
