On 25/05/2023 19:49, Jonathan Cameron via wrote:
> On Fri, 19 May 2023 16:58:02 +0800
> Li Zhijian <lizhij...@cn.fujitsu.com> wrote:
> 
>> Using the same style except the 'Topo' abbreviation.
>>
>> Signed-off-by: Li Zhijian <lizhij...@cn.fujitsu.com>
>> ---
>> I'm not a native speaker, feel free to correct me.
> 
> I've edited slightly and applied to my local staging tree for cxl patches.
> Includes fixing docs/clx -> docs/cxl in the patch title.

> Thanks, I'll queue this up with the next series of refactoring patches etc,


Thank you for your help.


Thanks
Zhijian


> 
> Jonathan
> 
> 
>> ---
>>   docs/system/devices/cxl.rst | 8 ++++----
>>   1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
>>
>> diff --git a/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst b/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst
>> index d3577a4d6da..56414d25871 100644
>> --- a/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst
>> +++ b/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst
>> @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ responsible for allocating appropriate ranges from 
>> within the CFMWs
>>   and exposing those via normal memory configurations as would be done
>>   for system RAM.
>>   
>> -Example system Topology. x marks the match in each decoder level::
>> +Example system topology. x marks the match in each decoder level::
>>   
>>     |<------------------SYSTEM PHYSICAL ADDRESS MAP (1)----------------->|
>>     |    __________   __________________________________   __________    |
>> @@ -187,8 +187,8 @@ Example system Topology. x marks the match in each 
>> decoder level::
>>          ___________|___   __________|__   __|_________   ___|_________
>>      (3)|  Root Port 0  | | Root Port 1 | | Root Port 2| | Root Port 3 |
>>         |  Appears in   | | Appears in  | | Appears in | | Appear in   |
>> -      |  PCI topology | | PCI Topology| | PCI Topo   | | PCI Topo    |
>> -      |  As 0c:00.0   | | as 0c:01.0  | | as de:00.0 | | as de:01.0  |
>> +      |  PCI topology | | PCI topology| | PCI Topo   | | PCI Topo    |
> 
> I've switched to topo for the abbreviation as well.  No particular reason
> it should have a capital letter.
> 
>> +      |  as 0c:00.0   | | as 0c:01.0  | | as de:00.0 | | as de:01.0  |
>>         |_______________| |_____________| |____________| |_____________|
>>               |                  |               |              |
>>               |                  |               |              |
>> @@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ Example topology involving a switch::
>>         |  Root Port 0  |
>>         |  Appears in   |
>>         |  PCI topology |
>> -      |  As 0c:00.0   |
>> +      |  as 0c:00.0   |
>>         |___________x___|
>>                     |
>>                     |
> 
> 

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