Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church:
It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
--- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
+++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
@@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
.IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
.IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
-These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
number and
+These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
number and
... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change.
The other changes look good.
the unit id.
.IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
.IX Item "index=index"
-This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list
+This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list
of available connectors of a given interface type.
.IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
.IX Item "media=media"
@@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
incremented:
.Sp
.Vb 1
-\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
+\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
.Ve
.Sp
-is interpreted like:
+is interpreted as:
.Sp
.Vb 1
\& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
