Alexander Belopolsky <belopol...@users.sourceforge.net> added the comment:
FWIW, I like the new patch better, but still have a few nitpicks: - Starting a sentence with an argument name is a bit awkward because that makes a sentence that starts with a lower case letter. - There is an extra space in :class: `list`. - It would make more boring prose, but I would prefer to see similar language used in each alternative. I.e. - To concatenate ... - To concatenate ... - To add ... - Why "an *iterable* of iterables" but "a *sequence* of strings"? - I am not sure it is correct to say "to concatenate an iterable", I think it should be "to concatenate items from an iterable." ---------- _______________________________________ Python tracker <rep...@bugs.python.org> <http://bugs.python.org/issue7447> _______________________________________ _______________________________________________ Python-bugs-list mailing list Unsubscribe: http://mail.python.org/mailman/options/python-bugs-list/archive%40mail-archive.com
