Raymond Hettinger <raymond.hettin...@gmail.com> added the comment:

The section heads should remain in title case.

The colon in the octal escape section should remain, but the "If" following it 
should be lower cased.

"Phonebook" should remain a single word.

"vs" is fine without the period in a section head.

It would be better to replace all of the "e.g." and "i.e" with "for example" 
and "such as".

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nosy: +rhettinger

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