Bugs item #1375599, was opened at 2005-12-07 10:55 Message generated for change (Comment added) made by nnorwitz You can respond by visiting: https://sourceforge.net/tracker/?func=detail&atid=105470&aid=1375599&group_id=5470
Please note that this message will contain a full copy of the comment thread, including the initial issue submission, for this request, not just the latest update. Category: Documentation Group: None Status: Open Resolution: None Priority: 5 Submitted By: Glen Kaukola (gkaukola) Assigned to: Nobody/Anonymous (nobody) Summary: Tutorial errors Initial Comment: In section 1 of the tutorial, it says this: "Python enables programs to written compactly and readably." It should probably read like so: "Python enables programs to be written compactly and readably." I'd like it even better like so: "Python enables programs to be compact and readable." Also, even though it probably doesn't matter really since it's just an example, in your Fibonacci sequence example in section 4.6 it should probably be "while b <= n" as opposed to "while b < n". Because if n == 1, nothing is spit out. But even then it still wouldn't handle 0. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >Comment By: Neal Norwitz (nnorwitz) Date: 2005-12-07 22:05 Message: Logged In: YES user_id=33168 Not sure where you are seeing the grammar problem in section 1. It is fixed in SVN and on this page: http://docs.python.org/tut/tut.html Presumably you are looking at an old version. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- You can respond by visiting: https://sourceforge.net/tracker/?func=detail&atid=105470&aid=1375599&group_id=5470 _______________________________________________ Python-bugs-list mailing list Unsubscribe: http://mail.python.org/mailman/options/python-bugs-list/archive%40mail-archive.com
