Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.laute...@proxmox.com> --- v2 -> v3: rebased on current master
getting-help.adoc | 9 ++++----- howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc | 4 ++-- pve-installation.adoc | 14 +++++++------- pve-package-repos.adoc | 11 +++++------ pve-system-requirements.adoc | 4 ++-- sysadmin.adoc | 2 +- 6 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-) diff --git a/getting-help.adoc b/getting-help.adoc index 8e81483..9f561c7 100644 --- a/getting-help.adoc +++ b/getting-help.adoc @@ -27,15 +27,14 @@ Mailing Lists This is a fast way to communicate with the {pve} community via email. * Mailing list for users: - http://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-user[PVE User - List] + http://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-user[PVE User List] {pve} is fully open source and contributions are welcome! The primary communication channel for developers is the: -* Mailing list for developer: - http://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel[PVE - development discussion] +* Mailing list for developers: + http://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel[PVE development + discussion] Commercial Support diff --git a/howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc b/howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc index d96bb03..940e050 100644 --- a/howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc +++ b/howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc @@ -28,5 +28,5 @@ right option to contribute. document. NOTE: If you are interested in working on the {pve} codebase, the -{webwiki-url}Developer_Documentation[Developer Documentation] wiki -article will show you where to start. +{webwiki-url}Developer_Documentation[Developer Documentation] wiki article will +show you where to start. diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc index 2ac47b2..2eb7cd6 100644 --- a/pve-installation.adoc +++ b/pve-installation.adoc @@ -35,13 +35,13 @@ Download the installer ISO at {website}en/downloads. It includes the following: * Complete operating system (Debian Linux, 64-bit) -* The {pve} installer, which partitions the local disk(s) with ext4, - ext3, xfs or ZFS and installs the operating system. +* The {pve} installer, which partitions the local disk(s) with ext4, ext3, xfs + or ZFS and installs the operating system. * {pve} kernel (Linux) with KVM and LXC support -* Complete toolset for administering virtual machines, containers and - all necessary resources +* Complete toolset for administering virtual machines, containers, and all + necessary resources * Web-based management interface @@ -175,9 +175,9 @@ VG on the same hard disk that can be used for LVM storage). `swapsize`:: -Defines the size of the `swap` volume. The default is the size of the -installed memory, minimum 4 GB and maximum 8 GB. The resulting value cannot -be greater than `hdsize/8`. +Defines the size of the `swap` volume. The default is the size of the installed +memory, minimum 4 GB and maximum 8 GB. The resulting value cannot be greater +than `hdsize/8`. + NOTE: If set to `0`, no `swap` volume will be created. diff --git a/pve-package-repos.adoc b/pve-package-repos.adoc index e11f8ec..b7e7674 100644 --- a/pve-package-repos.adoc +++ b/pve-package-repos.adoc @@ -32,10 +32,9 @@ deb http://security.debian.org/debian-security buster/updates main contrib {pve} Enterprise Repository ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -This is the default, stable and recommended repository, available for -all {pve} subscription users. It contains the most stable packages, -and is suitable for production use. The `pve-enterprise` repository is -enabled by default: +This is the default, stable, and recommended repository, available for all {pve} +subscription users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable for +production use. The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default: .File `/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pve-enterprise.list` ---- @@ -277,8 +276,8 @@ deb http://security.debian.org/ squeeze/updates main contrib Outdated: {pve} VE 1.x Repositories ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -{pve} 1.x is based on Debian 5.0 (``lenny'') and very outdated. Please -upgrade to latest version as soon as possible. +{pve} 1.x is based on Debian 5.0 (``lenny'') and very outdated. Please upgrade +to latest version as soon as possible. endif::wiki[] diff --git a/pve-system-requirements.adoc b/pve-system-requirements.adoc index c0e6258..5b09058 100644 --- a/pve-system-requirements.adoc +++ b/pve-system-requirements.adoc @@ -62,8 +62,8 @@ Simple performance overview To get an overview of the CPU and hard disk performance on an installed {pve} system, run the included `pveperf` tool. -NOTE: this is just a very quick and general benchmark. More detailed tests -are recommended, especially regarding the I/O performance of your system. +NOTE: this is just a very quick and general benchmark. More detailed tests are +recommended, especially regarding the I/O performance of your system. Supported web browsers for accessing the web interface ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ diff --git a/sysadmin.adoc b/sysadmin.adoc index 86b61f0..883f9bd 100644 --- a/sysadmin.adoc +++ b/sysadmin.adoc @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ See Also * link:/wiki/Package_Repositories[Package Repositories] -* link:/wiki/Network_Configuration[Network Configuration] +* link:/wiki/Network_Configuration[Network Configuration] * link:/wiki/System_Software_Updates[System Software Updates] -- 2.20.1 _______________________________________________ pve-devel mailing list pve-devel@pve.proxmox.com https://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel