Sorry for being a bit late, seeing as 4 patches are already applied, but
aside from some minor things noted in my other mails: LGTM regarding
style and content!
Reviewed-by: Stefan Reiter <s.rei...@proxmox.com>
On 2/5/20 3:16 PM, Aaron Lauterer wrote:
This is the first patch series aimed to overhaul our documentation. The
main goal is to make it easier to understand and more consistent.
Therefore the phrasing is changed in a lot of places, sometimes the
ordering of content as well. I tried to align the source to the 80
characters per line wherever possible.
The reason why this first patch series doesn't start at the very
beginning is because we are not yet happy with few things there.
v2 -> v3:
rebased on current master
v1[0] -> v2:
* incorporating suggestions received
* moved line length and white space fixes to separate patch
[0] https://pve.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2019-September/038938.html
Aaron Lauterer (10):
Overhaul Getting Help
Overhaul How To Improve Docs
Overhaul Translation
Overhaul Installation
Overhaul System Requirements
Overhaul Install from USB flash drive
Overhaul Sysadmin
Overhaul Package Repositories
OVerhaul System Software Updates
Fix whitespace and line length
getting-help.adoc | 47 +++---
howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc | 42 +++---
pve-installation.adoc | 274 +++++++++++++++++------------------
pve-package-repos.adoc | 154 ++++++++++----------
pve-system-requirements.adoc | 69 ++++-----
pve-usbstick.adoc | 109 +++++++-------
sysadmin.adoc | 40 ++---
system-software-updates.adoc | 25 ++--
translation.adoc | 37 ++---
9 files changed, 388 insertions(+), 409 deletions(-)
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